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tsukikoushi wrote in teamtemplar
Just a quick heads-up: I'll be taking the first draft of Cuckoo's Egg down in a few days in order to take the editing machete to it. If you're interested in reading the story as it stands, do it soon!

And thank you for bearing with me through this experiment, as well. It's definitely been a learning experience, aaaand I mean that in many, many different ways. I appreciate your comments and your feedback, even if I am pretty awful about responding to things (and, on that note: kaykayone, I got your message, but you have LJ messaging turned off in your privacy settings, so I don't have any way to respond!)

Let's see if I can't salvage this bastard, huh?

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I just want to say thank you for sharing the story with us. I can't say I see much wrong with it, although I thought the end was a bit abrupt - not sure if that's just me wishing for it to keep going though (even though you think it's a bit long). If you add the 'going away' scene - Jeremy's first job, Bran overhearing Ethan's praise of Jeremy and Bran's departure (including the rough sex between Bran and Jeremy ;-) as the final chapter, it would be the perfect closure to this part of the arc.

I've always wanted to know about Jeremy and Bran's beginnings - they are the two characters I find most interesting out of everyone in the SotT universe, so I'm very, very happy with this story. I hope you find a way to be happy with it too.

Oh - I forgot to add that I also love your using Depech Mode!

Edited at 2012-10-26 10:26 am (UTC)

I have really enjoyed reading and looking forward to more of the story. I would love to read the edited version and I agree that the ending seemed abrupt. And ... and .... So please more! I loved meeting Jeremy and Bran as young men and I find their characters so compelling.

Thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed it - thanks for posting.

I made some Britpicking notes as I was reading, if you would find those helpful - PM me if you would like them.

Thanks for letting me know, though it took me a while to find out what I did wrong =) Hope it works now.

Merry Christmas by the way ;)

wondering how the editing process was going????

this had been on my TBR list for awhile, and i was relishing the idea of delving into it!!!!!

hope its back up soon :)

How is the editing going? I never managed to read the last chapter before you took them all down so I'm doubly impatient to see the edited version go online.

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